The second chapter begins where the first one, 'Brothers' ends. Luke says his final farewell and gives Ioh a few items that are to help him through his mission to save his friends.
Of the items I'm considering for Luke to give Ioh, they are three:
1. A map of Forgotten City.
2. A silver pocket watch.
3. A golden compass.
What each of these do, I'm still trying to work out the details. The basic idea, though, is that Ioh has become an explorer in the city. His purpose is to find and free his friends from whatever has happened to them. So, in considering the objects needed for this journey, each one has to have something to do with direction and purpose. The basic ideas are:
The map gives the broad overview of the landscape - what lies ahead and what surrounds.
The watch keeps track of time, and, in fitting with the scene of steampunk, the inner 'heart' of the watch is made with cogs and keeps pace with the concept of time and the alloted machination of fate.
The compass helps keep one's bearings straight and on course.
Now, this is the general purpose of the objects, the 'surface' of their use and abilities. Each object helps the holder in other ways as well, such as to help them keep their memories and purpose. They are an object to help them focus so that they don't lose track of what they are trying to do in the mission, and so that whatever mystery within the workings of the city doesn't make them forget. That is, not only to lose track of their purpose on the mission, but also these objects keep the holder from forgetting who they are. If they forget who they are, then they too become trapped in the city and, effectively, become a 'cog in the wheel' of the city, in a sense.
These are just concepts, for now. How they will develop depends on the RP and storytelling in general.
Friday, April 8, 2011
Friday, April 1, 2011
Outline and Summary for Project Ziggurat
Since I am the originator of this project, and gave a 9 - point guide for making an outline and summary of making stories, I figure I should 'lead by example' and show one way to make a summary and outline. You don't have to do both, though it can help to better solidify your general idea for the storyline. After that, you can get more specific and can work on better forming the specifics of the events. That is, unless you want to keep it to being by chance within the RP. However, having pinnacle moments that must happen can be a good way to keeping the course of the story flowing as you would like it to. But, we'll save the more detailed structuring for later. For now, keep with forming the outline and summary of stories you would like to tell in the RP in Project Ziggurat.
Outline
1. The opening (the beginning/origins).
Ioh and others from Chamber escape some terrible catastrophe that leaves them wandering and seeking refuge.
2. Inciting incident (what calls your character to act in the story's setting)
Because the refugees need shelter, and a place to start anew, Ioh seeks out a place to stay, to which he finds the bunker.
3. First turning point (what first invites your character into the story/brings about the call to action).
After moving into the bunker, Ioh and others notice strange things going on, and so, to find out what is the cause of these things, Ioh decides to investigate the origins of the mysterious happenings.
4. Mid-point (the arc of the story, where the pieces of the story seem to come together and you think your character has it all wrapped up)
After looking around the bunker, Ioh shrugs off the mysterious happenings as being rats in the sewer, and possibly natural gas, or something else that causes the sensation of a 'rift' or 'portal effect' that causes dizziness and slight unease to certain people feeling the effects of the mysteries.
5. Second turning point (what pulls your character further into the story, what new elements of the story come to play and need to be payed attention to)
People start to begin missing from the bunker.
6. Crisis (where the pieces seem to fall apart, or mix and match up differently than perceived, or something pulls the original ideas and theories apart, or prevent them from being put together as previously thought possible)
After certain people wind up missing, Ioh finds that he cannot continue on with his original conclusions pertaining to the mysteries of the bunker and, more so, when exiting the bunker, finding that the doors open up to a completely new setting compared to where they were before they entered.
7. Climax (the pivotal moment, the beginning of the end, and high point of the story)
Ioh and some of the remaining go out in search of the missing refugees to which, what they find amazes them.
8. Resolution (how to put the pieces together, what starts to bring closure to the story)
Ioh and his cohorts find out what happened to their missing refugees and learn the mystery behind the 'bunker'.
9. Final page (The ending, what closes the adventure, and may set up the events for a new one)
In learning that the bunker is not really a bunker, but an inter-dimensional transporter that can travel through space, time, and among parallel universes, Ioh, and the rest of the refugees seek out a way to harness the abilities of the bunker, or Ziggurat to travel into many worlds, and many time periods.
Summary
After the tragedy of Chamber's destruction, Ioh and others set out to find a new place to call home. The refugees sought shelter in a bunker that was found on their wanderings of the land. However, strange things began to happen in the bunker, and Ioh decides to investigate what could be going on. On first look around, Ioh decides that much of the bumps in the night had to do with rats scurrying around, and the strange, uneasy, queasy feelings possibly were from a leak in a gas pipe, or some other natural air born influence. However, these theories lose weight when people began to wind up missing. Therefore, Ioh decides to investigate further what the mysterious disappearances may mean. In deciding to go outside the bunker, Ioh and a select few who volunteered to help in the search for the missing persons found that they were in a strange land which itself held many puzzles. Eventually, Ioh and his cohorts find out what happened to the missing refugees and, at the same time, the mystery behind the bunker. Apparently, the bunker is an inter-dimensional transporter that can be used to travel through space, time, and to parallel universes. After learning of the mysteries of what they now call the Ziggurat, Ioh and his cohort of refugees decide to pilot the monolithic transporter into many worlds, periods of times, and dimensions in order to go on more adventures.
Sunday, March 27, 2011
Character Oriented - Character Run RP
I've been thinking about this for a while, probably since I first began RPing in SL. The concept of character oriented - character run RP (CO-CRRP). People likely already have a concept of it, and probably already do this in some form. But, I'll go ahead and give a form of definition to what I mean.
For the most part, RP is primarily associated with a particular sim, and the particulars of what that sim tells you is approved as far as types of characters you can play. Sure, they may add on to that the reasons for why certain types of characters are allowed or not allowed within their sim - such as the setting, period, genre, 'realism', etc. That may be valid and logical to the sim and it's owners and hierarchy, but not necessarily so for the individual character. After all, who says that a samurai can't be found a urban setting, or a street thug in the countryside of China or Japan? Why couldn't someone of today be transported back in time to the Dark Ages, or some neanderthal/cro-magnon man be found in today's world, or some future distopia? And why would it be considered 'not real' for there to be genetic hybrid species of humanoids in a suburb? In SL, they can be there, and often they are! These sorts of things, among others that may seem like bizzare mixes and meshes of characters, they make up the diversity of what SL is, and who we are on SL, whether as an expression of a persona that is unable to be fully actualized irl, or as creative expressions meant for the purposes of exploring variety of ways to present one's self and interact with others in the SL metaverse. The focus here, though is on the diversity of character and expression within the realm of characters made for the purpose of RP.
But why is this expression limited in RP? The real answer is because sim owners and their crew make the rules about what they will and will not approve/allow to participate in a given sim. There may be good reason for that, but often it rejects the ability of individual characters to reason for themselves. While it is valid that some stories do not call for certain types of charcters, races, etc. The problematic of this is that where there could be stories made by characters in these sims, they are denied the ability to do so. And this is because RP is run by and large on a owned sim - cohort run RP (OS-CRRP) system. Basically, it's a difference of group v. individual conflict. In OS-CRRP, the whole purpose is to serve the whims and will of the sim owner and group that runs the sim. In CO-CRRP, individuals each have autonomy to run their characters as they see fit, and agree on whether to interact in certain stories or not.
I am not saying that either system of running RP is right or wrong. Both have their pros and cons. For OS-CRRP, a major pro is in the building of a community which works towards its own self preservation. A con, though is that, with the growth of community standards, conformity arises and can make things stagnant and the community less adaptable to change, or otherwise close in on itself and implode. For CO-CRRP, each individual having the freedom to choose their reality and have that greater amount of control over how their story develops can be refreshing for some. However, a con comes into play in that, while each person has freedom of choice, conflicts can arise when there is not a consensus among individuals about a clear vision on what should happen in a story, and what direction to move it in. Thus, there needs to be a balance between order in hierarchy and individual freedom of choice. But how to come to such balance?
For me, I understand the need for hierarchy. I also understand the need for individual freedom as well. And what I want to try for is to give a certain amount of order and guidance to help keep an RP environment stable for all who decide to participate in it. I also want each individual RPer to know and feel that their individual ability and freedom to choose who and what their character is, as well as what it does, is not trampled on by a tyrannical governing body that tries to press too far into an individual's right to the creation of their character. For this reason do I find specific group counsels, or rules about character creation a horrible plan. In my opinion, the expression of an individual character and its creation by its creator is something that should not be controlled by exterior force. Should a person decide to ask for advice on how to form a particular character among peers of similar said character, then that is the choice of the character to ask for that. It is a completely different thing than said peers dictating to the said individual that this, and only this is how this sort of character/species should look. It is for the individual to decide what sort of character they want, and how it should look, or who to go to in order to get advice on how to make such a character. It is not the place of a governing body to do that. If anything, what a governing body should do in any RP is make sure that those in the environment are holding to set rules about the particular game. They can also remind people that the particular environment is set in a certain setting, theme, period, genre, etc., but they ought not be the judge of what sort of type of character expression is allowed. Primarily, making sure that interactions are consented to, and that in the interactions, people are not being godmodded, metagamed, and griefed are the things that a hierarchy should be most focused.
For instance, say a dragon lands in the middle of the street in a modern city, the alarm shouldn't be at the dragon's presence, but if the dragon, as well as all other characters are conducting their RP in a way that keeps any conflicts within the IC story, and whether it is made clear that all parties involved are thusly involved in a consenting manner. If one cat has the head of a lioness and calls herself Bast, and another that has more human distinctions calls himself Sekhmet, the differences in interpretation of the feline is to be disregarded as a surface issue. If they keep any conflicts about the differences in IC and don't make drama OOC about it, then it's fine. The diversity is a good thing and should not be destroyed just because the two particular felines interpret their expressions of their characters in a different way. If one particular character wants to be considered an Inu (dog), and the other a Garu (werewolf/lycan), they can make those distinctions if they like, and have conflict about differences in IC. They may not let it cross over into OOC drama and metagaming tactics to ruin one or the other individual in personal grudge matches that have nothing to do with RP and ruin the experience for themselves and others.
These all seem to be common sense things. But, as my real life work experience has taught me thus far, common sense is somewhat of an oxymoron among all who call themselves a 'common' person. However, I do believe that CO-CRRP is possible with a limited amount of OS-CRRP interference, and is desirable. It takes trust among those involved in the RP, and, if anything, lack of trust and communication are among the top reasons that most RP fails eventually. But to gain the trust of fellow RPers, and to be able to communicate with them well brings about amazing results and leads to less hierarchical dictatorship. If done well, OS-CRRP would have so limited an involvement in the RP to the point that it seems nearly non-existent. And that is what should happen - let the CO-CRRP be in the forefront and be the majority of an RPers experience, and the OS-CRRP be in the background, primarily managing the basic rules and potentially being a part of the core group that helps in the guidance of character development and both personal and general storylines in the RP as needed. An RP that can hold that sort of balance is potentially the utopia of RP. Even so, it's worth striving for.
For the most part, RP is primarily associated with a particular sim, and the particulars of what that sim tells you is approved as far as types of characters you can play. Sure, they may add on to that the reasons for why certain types of characters are allowed or not allowed within their sim - such as the setting, period, genre, 'realism', etc. That may be valid and logical to the sim and it's owners and hierarchy, but not necessarily so for the individual character. After all, who says that a samurai can't be found a urban setting, or a street thug in the countryside of China or Japan? Why couldn't someone of today be transported back in time to the Dark Ages, or some neanderthal/cro-magnon man be found in today's world, or some future distopia? And why would it be considered 'not real' for there to be genetic hybrid species of humanoids in a suburb? In SL, they can be there, and often they are! These sorts of things, among others that may seem like bizzare mixes and meshes of characters, they make up the diversity of what SL is, and who we are on SL, whether as an expression of a persona that is unable to be fully actualized irl, or as creative expressions meant for the purposes of exploring variety of ways to present one's self and interact with others in the SL metaverse. The focus here, though is on the diversity of character and expression within the realm of characters made for the purpose of RP.
But why is this expression limited in RP? The real answer is because sim owners and their crew make the rules about what they will and will not approve/allow to participate in a given sim. There may be good reason for that, but often it rejects the ability of individual characters to reason for themselves. While it is valid that some stories do not call for certain types of charcters, races, etc. The problematic of this is that where there could be stories made by characters in these sims, they are denied the ability to do so. And this is because RP is run by and large on a owned sim - cohort run RP (OS-CRRP) system. Basically, it's a difference of group v. individual conflict. In OS-CRRP, the whole purpose is to serve the whims and will of the sim owner and group that runs the sim. In CO-CRRP, individuals each have autonomy to run their characters as they see fit, and agree on whether to interact in certain stories or not.
I am not saying that either system of running RP is right or wrong. Both have their pros and cons. For OS-CRRP, a major pro is in the building of a community which works towards its own self preservation. A con, though is that, with the growth of community standards, conformity arises and can make things stagnant and the community less adaptable to change, or otherwise close in on itself and implode. For CO-CRRP, each individual having the freedom to choose their reality and have that greater amount of control over how their story develops can be refreshing for some. However, a con comes into play in that, while each person has freedom of choice, conflicts can arise when there is not a consensus among individuals about a clear vision on what should happen in a story, and what direction to move it in. Thus, there needs to be a balance between order in hierarchy and individual freedom of choice. But how to come to such balance?
For me, I understand the need for hierarchy. I also understand the need for individual freedom as well. And what I want to try for is to give a certain amount of order and guidance to help keep an RP environment stable for all who decide to participate in it. I also want each individual RPer to know and feel that their individual ability and freedom to choose who and what their character is, as well as what it does, is not trampled on by a tyrannical governing body that tries to press too far into an individual's right to the creation of their character. For this reason do I find specific group counsels, or rules about character creation a horrible plan. In my opinion, the expression of an individual character and its creation by its creator is something that should not be controlled by exterior force. Should a person decide to ask for advice on how to form a particular character among peers of similar said character, then that is the choice of the character to ask for that. It is a completely different thing than said peers dictating to the said individual that this, and only this is how this sort of character/species should look. It is for the individual to decide what sort of character they want, and how it should look, or who to go to in order to get advice on how to make such a character. It is not the place of a governing body to do that. If anything, what a governing body should do in any RP is make sure that those in the environment are holding to set rules about the particular game. They can also remind people that the particular environment is set in a certain setting, theme, period, genre, etc., but they ought not be the judge of what sort of type of character expression is allowed. Primarily, making sure that interactions are consented to, and that in the interactions, people are not being godmodded, metagamed, and griefed are the things that a hierarchy should be most focused.
For instance, say a dragon lands in the middle of the street in a modern city, the alarm shouldn't be at the dragon's presence, but if the dragon, as well as all other characters are conducting their RP in a way that keeps any conflicts within the IC story, and whether it is made clear that all parties involved are thusly involved in a consenting manner. If one cat has the head of a lioness and calls herself Bast, and another that has more human distinctions calls himself Sekhmet, the differences in interpretation of the feline is to be disregarded as a surface issue. If they keep any conflicts about the differences in IC and don't make drama OOC about it, then it's fine. The diversity is a good thing and should not be destroyed just because the two particular felines interpret their expressions of their characters in a different way. If one particular character wants to be considered an Inu (dog), and the other a Garu (werewolf/lycan), they can make those distinctions if they like, and have conflict about differences in IC. They may not let it cross over into OOC drama and metagaming tactics to ruin one or the other individual in personal grudge matches that have nothing to do with RP and ruin the experience for themselves and others.
These all seem to be common sense things. But, as my real life work experience has taught me thus far, common sense is somewhat of an oxymoron among all who call themselves a 'common' person. However, I do believe that CO-CRRP is possible with a limited amount of OS-CRRP interference, and is desirable. It takes trust among those involved in the RP, and, if anything, lack of trust and communication are among the top reasons that most RP fails eventually. But to gain the trust of fellow RPers, and to be able to communicate with them well brings about amazing results and leads to less hierarchical dictatorship. If done well, OS-CRRP would have so limited an involvement in the RP to the point that it seems nearly non-existent. And that is what should happen - let the CO-CRRP be in the forefront and be the majority of an RPers experience, and the OS-CRRP be in the background, primarily managing the basic rules and potentially being a part of the core group that helps in the guidance of character development and both personal and general storylines in the RP as needed. An RP that can hold that sort of balance is potentially the utopia of RP. Even so, it's worth striving for.
Monday, March 21, 2011
Brainstorming: Rewriting of the Dream
Some of you may remember the pyramid diagram I sent out the past week. If not, or had not, and for the sake of those just joining in on the discourse, you can see the diagram here:
http://www.flickr.com/photos/iohannesii/5546966977/
This diagram is part of the beginning phase for the making of this new RP, or even in general the 'rewriting of the dream'. How this works? We'll get to that as we go through the concept for the building of the story we come up with for the RP.
We have already started the process in the build itself, which is a part of building the initial concepts for forming the physical setting(s) that may be a part of the RP we are looking to create. We have started with the major chunks of what is needed for RP to begin with - particularly a place, a setting -, and we are working on developing that more. The setting is where the story takes place, wich is the base level and foundation that must be put forward before the rest can be put in place. Along side that, there is needed the key players, individuals and groups, that interact within and breath life into the story. As the characters interact within the setting, they eventually will pose situations that need to be responded to - that bring a call to action. And with that, comes the action of the story, the actual doing of what sets things into motion and brings the excitement to its climax, and resulting conclusion.
Thus have been made mention the four main aspects of the process of story - the story/setting, the characters, the situation(s), and the action(s). Once the basic concepts and vision is put in place to address these four, then the dialogue and words flow out as they come into play. But first, we need to make sure the story works.
To begin with, to make sure the story works, there are some basic aspects of a story that we need to have answered and summarized in our minds. These aspects are as follows:
1. The opening (the beginning/origins)
2. Inciting incident (what calls your character to act in the story's setting)
3. First turning point (what first invites your character into the story/brings about the call to action)
4. Mid-point (the arc of the story, where the pieces of the story seem to come together and you think your character has it all wrapped up)
5. Second turning point (what pulls your character further into the story, what new elements of the story come to play and need to be payed attention to)
6. Crisis (where the pieces seem to fall apart, or mix and match up differently than percieved, or something pulls the original ideas and theories apart, or prevent them from being put together as previously thought possible)
7. Climax (the pivotal moment, the beginning of the end, and high point of the story)
8. Resolution (how to put the pieces together, what starts to bring closure to the story)
9. Final page (The ending, what closes the adventure, and may set up the events for a new one)
It is suggested that one should be able to summarize each of these aspects in one sentence apiece. As it is, in RP, these can be made into the qualifications for story specifications and approval. That is, if a person wants to propose a story arc that will cover more than a personal drama and want to comprise more of the whole of the RP community, they ought to be able to lay out each of these nine aspects in a summary of what they propose to do for this particular story. Not all these things necessaryily have to be put together in personal and freeform RP in genderal. Natural process likely will bring out these aspects, or at least later reasoned by a person as they try to tell the story of what happened. But, when working in a group to make a particular story in the whole, these aspects should have a basic draft to which the key players can follow and impose as need be to push the story along.
A key element for aspiring RP storytellers to consider is conflict. For stories we read in a book, or watch in a movie or TV drama (even radio dramas, for any that still listen to them) or even in theatre, we look for something unforgetable that captures our attention. Conflict is an important aspect of this. It's what drives all stories in some way or another. The key is that the conflict has to be clear. Unfocused or ambiguous conflicts generally are what a good RP story fall apart the easiest and often cause the particular unwanted dramas and OOC conflicts because we don't know what the other RPers are doing, nor why they are doing it. And that is a problem, especially if you are trying to build trust between these RPers in order to make stories that all involved can enjoy. This is not to say that we can't make mystery and surprise conflicts, but we have to be careful and earn the trust of fellow RPers before we involve ourselves in such things. Otherwise, going into such things without knowing you can trust the RPer to do what is best for the story is going to leave those nasty burn marks that many of us know already from previous bad experiences in RP. So, start with the basics and work through stories together is a good policy when either first starting out, or when beginning an RP with new or unfamiliar RPers. That way, what emotional dilemma may come from the conflict is primarily IC, and very little, if any, OOC in its basis, and thus a lot more manageable, because you trust that the conflict will come to resolution later.
Something important among writers, and what could improve the development of RPers, is the drafting and redrafting of ideas. It is suggested that a one page summary of a story ought to be made in two versions. You could do it as a 'book report' style, and/or outline the vision of what the story can become. You could even make a short story, or 'picture book' of these things. However best suits your way to better visualize the concept(s) you have in mind. The more you have the story mapped out in your mind, and even having multiple concepts of how to go about things the better prepared you will be when it comes to impliment such things in the actual time of the RP. Aspiring RP storytellers should have the original concept, as well as work on a Plan B, and even a Plan C and beyond so as to help them be ready for when a story they start takes a turn that wasn't initially considered in the original formation of the RP in their mind. Think of it like a Chess match, or any other game where you need to be two steps ahead and keeping on your toes. It is the twists and turns of RP that makes for the entertainment and addictiveness of the stories, and wanting to go further into them. So be ready, be prepared.
Considering the outline, and especially when an aspiring RP storyteller, you want to give the best expression of the vision. Why? Because, especially when there is a need for group approval to implement it out into the RP setting as a whole, you want to make sure that you put your best foot forward when presenting the story idea to those involved in giving the ok on such things. It's not just about them 'buying in', but also you want them to trust your vision, and be certain that you are up for the task of putting together a story arc that, hopefully, won't go into a lot of OOC drama and chaos. Everybody wants a good story, very few people want that story to turn into a OOC drama fest. And if you can present the story as something compelling, and show that you have ideas on how to keep things on track and limiting OOC crapola to a minimum, then you have gone a long way into gaining people's trust, as well as bringing them into buying in on your concept for a story arc to be implimented into the RP's general story as a whole.
Probably the most important thing after having the concept developed and polished is to step back and look at the story. Take yourself away from the immersion that we all share in making and being in a story, and give it a critical review from outside of it. Do you see any problems (both in the IC aspects of the story, and in any OOC elements that could be percieved to creep in) that need to be solved? In screenwriting terminoligy, this is where you would see if the 'spine is straight'. In other words, do things fit together? Can you see any areas that might bring unnecessary confusion or ambiguity about what is going on? Are there things that could be better improved upon, or may need a few extra options in case Plan A and/or B prove to fall short. The crux: is this RP story arc something manageable, and if not, then what can be done to make it so? And that would be something that an RP storyteller will need to be able to also convince those involved in the maintenance and development of a RP story about.
To summarize, and put it into context for us Zigs, first and foremost, our focus needs to be on the four main aspects:
1. the base story, the origins of the setting (what is it, and what would we like it to develop into),
2. who we as the characters are (character background, and some concept of what we would like our characters to become),
3. what situations we would like for our characters to get themselves into, and
4. how to put it all into action.
I would like to also propose that we make a 'Story Summary Board' and have in place two notecards to be used by this Board. One would be a basic outline for aspiring RP storytellers to use in order to make their summary to the Board. The other notecard would be a sort of key card for making the assessments on whether the proposed RP story arc has the essentials and could be implimented into the main RP story.
Along these lines, I'd like to test out these notecards among ourselves, and have each of us summarise our visions of what we would like to see happen within the RP that we are trying to develop. We really haven't come together on these things, and I think the sooner we can do this, the sooner we will be able to focus and be able to produce a general RP background, and initial set of story arcs that would make this project take form and become something compelling to RP.
Once we've shaped out our own summaries and outlines, I'd like for each of us to then take our steps back, and both review our own ideas, as well as those of our peers, which is each of us Zigs in the group. I think, knowing each of us is looking to get out of this project in the form of stories we'd like to participate in will better help us focus and regroup our efforts to move things along and get into what we all want to do, and that is RP.
Above all, this project is for fun, and I propose these things to challenge us, and to help further develop our prowess in becoming better RPers and storytellers. When we can show the quality of our abilities, we attract others to that quality, and thus help refuel the story with new ideas and people that want to be involved with the best stories that we can possibly make together. And that's what I hope to provide to all of you, and our future Zigs, in whatever form we eventually take.
http://www.flickr.com/photos/iohannesii/5546966977/
This diagram is part of the beginning phase for the making of this new RP, or even in general the 'rewriting of the dream'. How this works? We'll get to that as we go through the concept for the building of the story we come up with for the RP.
We have already started the process in the build itself, which is a part of building the initial concepts for forming the physical setting(s) that may be a part of the RP we are looking to create. We have started with the major chunks of what is needed for RP to begin with - particularly a place, a setting -, and we are working on developing that more. The setting is where the story takes place, wich is the base level and foundation that must be put forward before the rest can be put in place. Along side that, there is needed the key players, individuals and groups, that interact within and breath life into the story. As the characters interact within the setting, they eventually will pose situations that need to be responded to - that bring a call to action. And with that, comes the action of the story, the actual doing of what sets things into motion and brings the excitement to its climax, and resulting conclusion.
Thus have been made mention the four main aspects of the process of story - the story/setting, the characters, the situation(s), and the action(s). Once the basic concepts and vision is put in place to address these four, then the dialogue and words flow out as they come into play. But first, we need to make sure the story works.
To begin with, to make sure the story works, there are some basic aspects of a story that we need to have answered and summarized in our minds. These aspects are as follows:
1. The opening (the beginning/origins)
2. Inciting incident (what calls your character to act in the story's setting)
3. First turning point (what first invites your character into the story/brings about the call to action)
4. Mid-point (the arc of the story, where the pieces of the story seem to come together and you think your character has it all wrapped up)
5. Second turning point (what pulls your character further into the story, what new elements of the story come to play and need to be payed attention to)
6. Crisis (where the pieces seem to fall apart, or mix and match up differently than percieved, or something pulls the original ideas and theories apart, or prevent them from being put together as previously thought possible)
7. Climax (the pivotal moment, the beginning of the end, and high point of the story)
8. Resolution (how to put the pieces together, what starts to bring closure to the story)
9. Final page (The ending, what closes the adventure, and may set up the events for a new one)
It is suggested that one should be able to summarize each of these aspects in one sentence apiece. As it is, in RP, these can be made into the qualifications for story specifications and approval. That is, if a person wants to propose a story arc that will cover more than a personal drama and want to comprise more of the whole of the RP community, they ought to be able to lay out each of these nine aspects in a summary of what they propose to do for this particular story. Not all these things necessaryily have to be put together in personal and freeform RP in genderal. Natural process likely will bring out these aspects, or at least later reasoned by a person as they try to tell the story of what happened. But, when working in a group to make a particular story in the whole, these aspects should have a basic draft to which the key players can follow and impose as need be to push the story along.
A key element for aspiring RP storytellers to consider is conflict. For stories we read in a book, or watch in a movie or TV drama (even radio dramas, for any that still listen to them) or even in theatre, we look for something unforgetable that captures our attention. Conflict is an important aspect of this. It's what drives all stories in some way or another. The key is that the conflict has to be clear. Unfocused or ambiguous conflicts generally are what a good RP story fall apart the easiest and often cause the particular unwanted dramas and OOC conflicts because we don't know what the other RPers are doing, nor why they are doing it. And that is a problem, especially if you are trying to build trust between these RPers in order to make stories that all involved can enjoy. This is not to say that we can't make mystery and surprise conflicts, but we have to be careful and earn the trust of fellow RPers before we involve ourselves in such things. Otherwise, going into such things without knowing you can trust the RPer to do what is best for the story is going to leave those nasty burn marks that many of us know already from previous bad experiences in RP. So, start with the basics and work through stories together is a good policy when either first starting out, or when beginning an RP with new or unfamiliar RPers. That way, what emotional dilemma may come from the conflict is primarily IC, and very little, if any, OOC in its basis, and thus a lot more manageable, because you trust that the conflict will come to resolution later.
Something important among writers, and what could improve the development of RPers, is the drafting and redrafting of ideas. It is suggested that a one page summary of a story ought to be made in two versions. You could do it as a 'book report' style, and/or outline the vision of what the story can become. You could even make a short story, or 'picture book' of these things. However best suits your way to better visualize the concept(s) you have in mind. The more you have the story mapped out in your mind, and even having multiple concepts of how to go about things the better prepared you will be when it comes to impliment such things in the actual time of the RP. Aspiring RP storytellers should have the original concept, as well as work on a Plan B, and even a Plan C and beyond so as to help them be ready for when a story they start takes a turn that wasn't initially considered in the original formation of the RP in their mind. Think of it like a Chess match, or any other game where you need to be two steps ahead and keeping on your toes. It is the twists and turns of RP that makes for the entertainment and addictiveness of the stories, and wanting to go further into them. So be ready, be prepared.
Considering the outline, and especially when an aspiring RP storyteller, you want to give the best expression of the vision. Why? Because, especially when there is a need for group approval to implement it out into the RP setting as a whole, you want to make sure that you put your best foot forward when presenting the story idea to those involved in giving the ok on such things. It's not just about them 'buying in', but also you want them to trust your vision, and be certain that you are up for the task of putting together a story arc that, hopefully, won't go into a lot of OOC drama and chaos. Everybody wants a good story, very few people want that story to turn into a OOC drama fest. And if you can present the story as something compelling, and show that you have ideas on how to keep things on track and limiting OOC crapola to a minimum, then you have gone a long way into gaining people's trust, as well as bringing them into buying in on your concept for a story arc to be implimented into the RP's general story as a whole.
Probably the most important thing after having the concept developed and polished is to step back and look at the story. Take yourself away from the immersion that we all share in making and being in a story, and give it a critical review from outside of it. Do you see any problems (both in the IC aspects of the story, and in any OOC elements that could be percieved to creep in) that need to be solved? In screenwriting terminoligy, this is where you would see if the 'spine is straight'. In other words, do things fit together? Can you see any areas that might bring unnecessary confusion or ambiguity about what is going on? Are there things that could be better improved upon, or may need a few extra options in case Plan A and/or B prove to fall short. The crux: is this RP story arc something manageable, and if not, then what can be done to make it so? And that would be something that an RP storyteller will need to be able to also convince those involved in the maintenance and development of a RP story about.
To summarize, and put it into context for us Zigs, first and foremost, our focus needs to be on the four main aspects:
1. the base story, the origins of the setting (what is it, and what would we like it to develop into),
2. who we as the characters are (character background, and some concept of what we would like our characters to become),
3. what situations we would like for our characters to get themselves into, and
4. how to put it all into action.
I would like to also propose that we make a 'Story Summary Board' and have in place two notecards to be used by this Board. One would be a basic outline for aspiring RP storytellers to use in order to make their summary to the Board. The other notecard would be a sort of key card for making the assessments on whether the proposed RP story arc has the essentials and could be implimented into the main RP story.
Along these lines, I'd like to test out these notecards among ourselves, and have each of us summarise our visions of what we would like to see happen within the RP that we are trying to develop. We really haven't come together on these things, and I think the sooner we can do this, the sooner we will be able to focus and be able to produce a general RP background, and initial set of story arcs that would make this project take form and become something compelling to RP.
Once we've shaped out our own summaries and outlines, I'd like for each of us to then take our steps back, and both review our own ideas, as well as those of our peers, which is each of us Zigs in the group. I think, knowing each of us is looking to get out of this project in the form of stories we'd like to participate in will better help us focus and regroup our efforts to move things along and get into what we all want to do, and that is RP.
Above all, this project is for fun, and I propose these things to challenge us, and to help further develop our prowess in becoming better RPers and storytellers. When we can show the quality of our abilities, we attract others to that quality, and thus help refuel the story with new ideas and people that want to be involved with the best stories that we can possibly make together. And that's what I hope to provide to all of you, and our future Zigs, in whatever form we eventually take.
Saturday, February 12, 2011
Acting and Directing
This is something that I had been pondering on, coming from various sources of origin - some good, and some not so great. For one not so great origin was the first time I was accused of 'directing.' This came from one of my exes on SL. It was during a time of frustration and confusion among us. The main thing was changes. Now, let me make this clear, I do see change as a good thing, for the most part. But it also depends on what the change is and how it can effect a person or affect the interaction of persons. This is something that I don't think many RPers think about too much, as self indulgences often are more at the forefront for a good many, rather than consideration for the stories at hand, or could be grasped if persons involved were not so stuck on selfish desires, but rather considered more holistic goals that could be achieved through cooperation and collaborative efforts.
To this end, I am not going to get heavily into a theory of holism, but, I do contend that the basic principle is key to the particular aspects of 'directing' as it pertains to RP as it does to the more general aspects of direction and movement as a whole in universal life in general. And the great thing is, this concept has been adequately defined already in the World English Dictionary entry of the term 'holism' in defining that "the significance of the parts can only be understood in terms of their contribution to the significance of the whole" (http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/holism).
So what does this have to do with 'directing'? Everything. You see, an actor in a play is one 'part' to the whole of the play. Yes, all actors are important to the play in as much as they contribute to the whole of the production. Even just laying there as a stump, or standing there silent and stoic, or as some timid wallflower at some dance on the stage, the person there on the stage is contributing to the whole imagery of the scene. If one were to wander from the foreground, and look to these particulars, an audience member may find themselves asking, "I wonder who that is?" or "What is that person doing there?" Essentially, in either question what is being asked is, "How does this part correlate to the whole?"
There could be a number of answers. The person may be dressed in period clothes, say, a lute player lounging around playing a subtle tune that may be heard along the path to the castle, or a man in a business suit pacing back and forth as he has a conversation on his cell phone, to which the audience does not hear, but can only guess what it may mean. Whatever the reason is, the particular of what is going on in the background of the scene aids in giving the representation of what is going on in the foreground as being something that doesn't happen in a vacuum, but in a living, breathing setting that the audience gets invited to view in the story unfolding on the stage.
RP is similar to that, but much more interactive. The 'actors' are both part of the scene and part of the audience. Directors also participate as actors, audience, and within the production of the scene - to put things in place to which the actors may choose to interact with. The problem is, RPers can sometimes be very selfish. Each one wants to be in that leading role, and few wish to be in the background of a scene - to just watch and not particularly be in the center of the stage of a scene.
Contrary to some people's beliefs, I am more comfortable with behind the scenes. While my characters have taken lead in certain aspects, I'm also happy just to contribute to the whole in some fashion, without having to be at the center of everything. Of course, from my perspective, I can be the narrator and give my view on the way I see things as going or having gone, but it is not the end all be all of things. It is just one perspective, just as another person's perspective in the same scene is theirs. Most of the times in my editing of any RP stories I have been involved in, they are generally in the 3rd person. Of course they focus on scenes I have been in, particularly because I'm not 3rd person omniscient, and thus unable to see the scenes of what others have done in a particular RP, unless they happen to share such things with me in the aftermath. But even so, this only shows what is great about RP - that there can be one particular story in production, but there are numerous other stories that come out of that production that has the potential for a great epic and adventure for all participating as a whole.
However, as much as this is true in a holistic sense, going under the basic principle that "the significance of the parts can only be understood in terms of their contribution to the significance of the whole," the quality and nature these productions and the stories that come from them still has to do with the quality and nature of the direction taken at the initial point of production. At the time that I was accused of being a 'director,' I think I took it wrong. Or, more precisely, I let the person who made the accusation have the power of persuasion to make me consider that directing was a bad thing. But directing itself was not the bad thing. The direction at the time was. Focus was lost. Too much was being changed, and the scene was falling apart. I had my contribution to that, and I suppose that still has a bit of a haunting nature for me. But, now, I can see that I had little to no control on these things. Aspects that people back then would not understand, nor seemed to care to, were taking away from the focus on the direction. I lost faith in many people then, both rightly and wrongly so. On one hand, I should know that faith in humanity is a bad deal, because people can and do change and can be unreliable. And let's face it, many people online, let alone in SL, an online community are often dysfunctional and very, to put it bluntly, flakey. Commitment to something is hard to get, and thus is why many good ideas for productions in SL RP can go south. Not all the components can or want to participate in the whole. But even so, directors still try to push productions to see if any of them do catch on and do that miraculous expansion into a multitude of amazing stories.
To be fair, though, to the online population, it is a reflection of the populace of humanity as a whole too. This I get a daily dose of with my work in real life. Out of all call I take at a call center, 10% at best actually are sales. Of those, I'd say maybe 40% actually listen the whole way through the script - from the introduction, the sales pitch, to the rebuttal, and actually stay on for the closing of the call. Another 40% to 45% will listen, or seem to be, but interrupt somewhere along the way, as well as through the closing (these are often the ones that will try to argue, more likely than not). And the last 5% to 10% will eventually hang up, to which, maybe they actually listened to the prior statement in the recorded portion of the call that told them that their card was activated and ready to use, and did not get confused by the additional portion that said, "please stay on the line to hear about your product offers." For the 5% that hang up before I have to start the introduction, I commend you for listening. For the other 5% that remain on, as well as for those that get angry at someone they believe has the audacity to sell on them, grow up and either clean out your ears, or get a clue and learn to listen better. It's not my fault that you didn't listen, nor should you be surprised by a sales agent actually (*gasps!*) making a sales pitch. :p
At any rate, the point, even to the rant paragraph above, is that, in whole, the ideal for directing is to be able to produce something that generates even more energy to the entire experience. While someone tried to tell me this was a 'bad' thing, to be directing, I just have to say, I'm sorry, but it wasn't the directing that was bad, but rather the direction of things at the time, as well as loss of focus on goals. This person may not like the concept of goals, but, the reality is goals are important. Without goals, there can be no direction, and thus people easily get lost. The parts fall apart, and the whole loses it's shape and becomes disconnected from itself. In essence, it becomes a collapsed universe. But, fortunately, new universes, and a new holism can come into being. As a director, I seek to find a way to help shape one of those new universes that has been cut off from the old one. And for those persons, both new and old, that choose to be grafted into this 'brave new world', I welcome you, and may we have many grand adventures in our stories, with many exciting scenarios and themes to explore.
To this end, I am not going to get heavily into a theory of holism, but, I do contend that the basic principle is key to the particular aspects of 'directing' as it pertains to RP as it does to the more general aspects of direction and movement as a whole in universal life in general. And the great thing is, this concept has been adequately defined already in the World English Dictionary entry of the term 'holism' in defining that "the significance of the parts can only be understood in terms of their contribution to the significance of the whole" (http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/holism).
So what does this have to do with 'directing'? Everything. You see, an actor in a play is one 'part' to the whole of the play. Yes, all actors are important to the play in as much as they contribute to the whole of the production. Even just laying there as a stump, or standing there silent and stoic, or as some timid wallflower at some dance on the stage, the person there on the stage is contributing to the whole imagery of the scene. If one were to wander from the foreground, and look to these particulars, an audience member may find themselves asking, "I wonder who that is?" or "What is that person doing there?" Essentially, in either question what is being asked is, "How does this part correlate to the whole?"
There could be a number of answers. The person may be dressed in period clothes, say, a lute player lounging around playing a subtle tune that may be heard along the path to the castle, or a man in a business suit pacing back and forth as he has a conversation on his cell phone, to which the audience does not hear, but can only guess what it may mean. Whatever the reason is, the particular of what is going on in the background of the scene aids in giving the representation of what is going on in the foreground as being something that doesn't happen in a vacuum, but in a living, breathing setting that the audience gets invited to view in the story unfolding on the stage.
RP is similar to that, but much more interactive. The 'actors' are both part of the scene and part of the audience. Directors also participate as actors, audience, and within the production of the scene - to put things in place to which the actors may choose to interact with. The problem is, RPers can sometimes be very selfish. Each one wants to be in that leading role, and few wish to be in the background of a scene - to just watch and not particularly be in the center of the stage of a scene.
Contrary to some people's beliefs, I am more comfortable with behind the scenes. While my characters have taken lead in certain aspects, I'm also happy just to contribute to the whole in some fashion, without having to be at the center of everything. Of course, from my perspective, I can be the narrator and give my view on the way I see things as going or having gone, but it is not the end all be all of things. It is just one perspective, just as another person's perspective in the same scene is theirs. Most of the times in my editing of any RP stories I have been involved in, they are generally in the 3rd person. Of course they focus on scenes I have been in, particularly because I'm not 3rd person omniscient, and thus unable to see the scenes of what others have done in a particular RP, unless they happen to share such things with me in the aftermath. But even so, this only shows what is great about RP - that there can be one particular story in production, but there are numerous other stories that come out of that production that has the potential for a great epic and adventure for all participating as a whole.
However, as much as this is true in a holistic sense, going under the basic principle that "the significance of the parts can only be understood in terms of their contribution to the significance of the whole," the quality and nature these productions and the stories that come from them still has to do with the quality and nature of the direction taken at the initial point of production. At the time that I was accused of being a 'director,' I think I took it wrong. Or, more precisely, I let the person who made the accusation have the power of persuasion to make me consider that directing was a bad thing. But directing itself was not the bad thing. The direction at the time was. Focus was lost. Too much was being changed, and the scene was falling apart. I had my contribution to that, and I suppose that still has a bit of a haunting nature for me. But, now, I can see that I had little to no control on these things. Aspects that people back then would not understand, nor seemed to care to, were taking away from the focus on the direction. I lost faith in many people then, both rightly and wrongly so. On one hand, I should know that faith in humanity is a bad deal, because people can and do change and can be unreliable. And let's face it, many people online, let alone in SL, an online community are often dysfunctional and very, to put it bluntly, flakey. Commitment to something is hard to get, and thus is why many good ideas for productions in SL RP can go south. Not all the components can or want to participate in the whole. But even so, directors still try to push productions to see if any of them do catch on and do that miraculous expansion into a multitude of amazing stories.
To be fair, though, to the online population, it is a reflection of the populace of humanity as a whole too. This I get a daily dose of with my work in real life. Out of all call I take at a call center, 10% at best actually are sales. Of those, I'd say maybe 40% actually listen the whole way through the script - from the introduction, the sales pitch, to the rebuttal, and actually stay on for the closing of the call. Another 40% to 45% will listen, or seem to be, but interrupt somewhere along the way, as well as through the closing (these are often the ones that will try to argue, more likely than not). And the last 5% to 10% will eventually hang up, to which, maybe they actually listened to the prior statement in the recorded portion of the call that told them that their card was activated and ready to use, and did not get confused by the additional portion that said, "please stay on the line to hear about your product offers." For the 5% that hang up before I have to start the introduction, I commend you for listening. For the other 5% that remain on, as well as for those that get angry at someone they believe has the audacity to sell on them, grow up and either clean out your ears, or get a clue and learn to listen better. It's not my fault that you didn't listen, nor should you be surprised by a sales agent actually (*gasps!*) making a sales pitch. :p
At any rate, the point, even to the rant paragraph above, is that, in whole, the ideal for directing is to be able to produce something that generates even more energy to the entire experience. While someone tried to tell me this was a 'bad' thing, to be directing, I just have to say, I'm sorry, but it wasn't the directing that was bad, but rather the direction of things at the time, as well as loss of focus on goals. This person may not like the concept of goals, but, the reality is goals are important. Without goals, there can be no direction, and thus people easily get lost. The parts fall apart, and the whole loses it's shape and becomes disconnected from itself. In essence, it becomes a collapsed universe. But, fortunately, new universes, and a new holism can come into being. As a director, I seek to find a way to help shape one of those new universes that has been cut off from the old one. And for those persons, both new and old, that choose to be grafted into this 'brave new world', I welcome you, and may we have many grand adventures in our stories, with many exciting scenarios and themes to explore.
Thursday, January 13, 2011
Literary Humor: Call Me A Poet
Every now and then, OOC conversation does wind up going beyond the usual bullshit and gets semi intellectual. Humor still remains, and, I would say, that is a good thing. And to show the sort of stuff that I speak of, here is an excerpt from a recent discussion on poetry:
***** *****1: Well call me a poet.
***** *****2: Uh huh.
Iohannes Crispien: Well, if you've been waiting years to get poetry published, then go drink one's self into a stupor, die young, and then people publish you and tell the world how brilliant an unsung hero of literature you are, then you can call yourself a poet.
***** *****2: Except for the young part, it's too late for that for him.
Iohannes Crispien: well, there's always an exception to the rules.
***** *****1: Only in western cultures. In the east, it's common for a man of my years to write poetry.
Iohannes Crispien: But can still go into a drunken stupor and make all sorts of bawdy poetry that one day becomes canon of literature under some genre you never knew it was while writing it.
***** *****1: It's not required it be good poetry.
Iohannes Crispien: Have you seen what makes it into the canon these days? Indeed, no it doesn't!
***** *****1: Too true.
***** *****1: Well call me a poet.
***** *****2: Uh huh.
Iohannes Crispien: Well, if you've been waiting years to get poetry published, then go drink one's self into a stupor, die young, and then people publish you and tell the world how brilliant an unsung hero of literature you are, then you can call yourself a poet.
***** *****2: Except for the young part, it's too late for that for him.
Iohannes Crispien: well, there's always an exception to the rules.
***** *****1: Only in western cultures. In the east, it's common for a man of my years to write poetry.
Iohannes Crispien: But can still go into a drunken stupor and make all sorts of bawdy poetry that one day becomes canon of literature under some genre you never knew it was while writing it.
***** *****1: It's not required it be good poetry.
Iohannes Crispien: Have you seen what makes it into the canon these days? Indeed, no it doesn't!
***** *****1: Too true.
Monday, January 10, 2011
The Story of the Felines
Note: This is a very rough draft of something that I had been inspired to start to write last night. It holds within it bits and pieces of other concepts and ideas I had for almost three years now, but with a slightly different twist. I'm not sure who, among my characters will be the narrator. I may just decide to keep it ambiguous and unnamed. Though, those that know my characters well enough may have some idea who might be most likely to be speaking.
At any rate, hope some of you who read this find it at least mildly entertaining or of some interest. It's still a rough draft, so don't tear it down too much, if you don't like it. :p
Also, don't get hung up on the title. It's bound to change eventually.
Approximate Page Count: 2
At any rate, hope some of you who read this find it at least mildly entertaining or of some interest. It's still a rough draft, so don't tear it down too much, if you don't like it. :p
Also, don't get hung up on the title. It's bound to change eventually.
The Story of the Felines
Approximate Page Count: 2
Approximate Word Count: 1486
Synopsis: Introduction to the story. A telling of a particular mythos, leading into concepts and ideas that may (or may not) have bearing or relevance to the underlying theme(s) of the story as it unfolds.
Theme Song: Canvas - Imogen Heap
Slow, hard, dark, weighed down love, black canvas
revolve within, you understand.
Fragile Earth where cracks in the temperature,
keep it cool to give, you understand.
Hijacked, lost track, light fades, another day left.
It's long shadows lure you in.
The more you look, the less you see.
So close your eyes, and start to breathe.
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I have a story to tell. I want to tell you a story. Or, more to the point, I want to take you on a journey. A hero's journey. I must warn you. You will not like it. Not at first, at least. And maybe you won't like the ending. I don't know what you like for a story, nor where you would like to go. All I know is, that this journey goes where it goes, just like how the wind blows. Maybe that is fitting, being a Gemini. Like the brothers of ancient legend, Castor and Pallox. The one brother being a demigod, while the other just a mortal. And yet the immortal one chose to give a portion of his time in the heavens to his mortal half. And that was a story of brotherly love from the Hellenists. That one brother would sacrifice his time to descend into Hades so that the other could spend time exalted in the heavens. And this but one note in the story of the heroic. The stuff of legends.
Centuries, maybe even millenniae later, a similar tale of heroic deed and brotherly love is given to us in a more universal way. This one having the humble beginnings in Bethlehem, further east of the Hellenic shores. A child born, who was not merely known as a demigod, but became known as the Son of God, and God incarnate. Much was said of him in his temporal stay here among us, and after. But his love was a similar sacrifice, but not just to one brother. He visited Hades and brought from that pit many who would become his brothers through past faith in his Father, as well as, among those living, make brothers of those who accepted him, and believed.
But none of this matters. Or, better put, it only represents a small perspective of the journey. Of the story. It is something I have no ending to, because I am still on this journey, and still creating this story. Nor can I say where the beginning is. I can give a starting point at the particular place and time that this portion of a much larger story, and journey shall be noted. However, do not expect any times nor dates of when this takes place, just be happy that there is a place, and persons to which inhabit this place.
Setting. A woods. Not just any woods. But a woods with a particular creature that dwells in it. This creature is a cat. Not just any cat, like the four legged variety you see here among us in our particular shared reality in what we call the real world. But rather a humanoid variety, with like variety of origin of species, to which there may be at least two main sects that still live – the ancients, and the new breed.
The ancients are a particular sort. They have long standing traditions that date back to the time of the Golden Age. To the dawn of time. With that said, there are two denominations of this sect. The male denomination that has as its matriarch the Egyptian cat goddess Sekhmet. The female denomination takes their origins from the sister of Sekhmet: Baast, or Bastet as she is sometimes called. Both formed the society of the, the first humanoid cats, and they spread throughout the east and west, and left their prints in all areas of the world. But, eventually, the Golden Age died out, and the feline society nearly died with it.
Remnants of the Sekhmets and Baasts lived on. But most survived by hiding from humans when the Age of Man came to be. Ruins that used to be sacred to the Ancients became the new temples for Man. And eventually the feline features were diminished and altered to look more human. Even so, some humans could hear the whispering mews and purrs and scratchings of the cats, that some men came to revere cats, maintaining the dignity of the feline, and even praise them as divine.
However, some humans resented the ancient felines, and chose to abolish the way of the cats. They started the first known war between the humans and the cats. And though these original battles did end in treaty and alliance, the memory of Man is not very good. Thousands of years later, these once held divine creatures came to be hunted by humans of a militant age who wanted nothing more than the cat ears and tails to claim. Other humans were curious to what made these felines, and so robbed from the dead ancients the twisting spiral strands of their essence. And from these strands is born the New Breed.
To many of the Ancients, those that still live, the feline sect of the New Breed is a bastard child. For the New Breed is the product of the pure helix of the Felix that has been tainted with various abominable breeding mixes of the wild to domesticated four-legged cats, as well as the more impure strands of human essence. At least, to the Ancients, this is true, and they attest to it being proven even by humankind's own ancient texts that speak of a stain upon the strand of their species. So thus, the New Breed shares in that stain, and the darkness that veils it.
But to the New Breed, that knows not of the Ancients, or only bits and pieces mixed in the illusions of prejudices of Man, they only perceive what they can from day to day, and upon the whims of what they experience among humanity. The most common of experience is slavery. Slavery to humans. Slavery to the whims and will of masters made so by malevolence, and passing it off in the name of science. But does science dictate that cruelty should be the hand played against these creatures that have fallen, and not of their own will, but by the already tainted will of Man?
The Ancients do have pity for the poor beasts. Not for Man. The treacherous lot that violated what should have been time honored treaties. But for those felines of the New Breed. Yet pity does not mean acceptance. Nor understanding. If anything, it is a lamentation in knowing the past of this wretched New Breed, knowing their origins cam from the fall of loved ones – brothers, sisters, mothers, fathers, and many other members of a once proud and mighty race of the Days of Gold, before the world became cold and old, and Night and Day would meet and mingle in a never-ending twilight, where both Sun and Moon stood together in the same sky to watch on the land as all creation passes on by. When the heavens truly in that commingling looked like gold. And no one knew that the treachery of Man would one day end these great and legendary days of old.
Even so, this is still nonsense. It has little to do about this story. This journey, and our hero never saw these days. Much of them have passed from common memory, or are locked up in the mixed bag of the memory of poets and priests, or the data of research that has long since been covered in the dust and piling of classified files among men. Only the storytellers and record keepers of the Ancients hold in frail memory and decaying parchments of this time. And, unless the more pure helix of the Felix holds some osmosis power, the felines of the New Breed are all but lost to this grand history.
This does not matter. For the starting point of this story and the journey it tells is within the woods earlier spoken of. It's not even the beginning for this particular cat, or group of cats, but it is the beginning to this story and the journey that these felines take. They rest among the treetops in rustic housing, both quaint and cozy. It is among the few lands that is predominantly feline and free. The freedoms of these particular cats may come from being on a relatively remote mountain top. While in the spring and summer, it is quite clear and green, and even seems like a slice of the heavens, after the break of fall, and on into the winter, the place becomes so harsh that, for those not acclimated to such cold, it would be a near portrayal of if Hades had frozen over. But even so, the felines that live here call it their sanctuary, their asylum. And so, from here is the beginnings of the story of a hero's journey, and I shall tell you the story of these particular cats – the good, the bad, and all else that comes upon those that play a part in the pathway that these cats travel upon to reach their destiny.
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